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La Luna llena brillaba iluminando la noche fría y húmeda. Dos personas acostadas en la hierba mojada de un jardín viejo se susurraban palabras de amor al oído. Abrazadas bajo la luz de la Luna las amantes ignoraban al resto del mundo, solo había espacio para su eterno amor.

Sus cuerpos, abrazados, se fundían formando uno solo. Sus almas se entrelazaban jugando sobre ellas. La Luna las observaba emocionada, pues sabía que aquella ternura solamente era capaz de verla ella.

Las chicas sonreían hipnotizadas por la magia del amor y la belleza de aquella lejana amiga que las espiaba desde el cielo. El viento frío y fuerte agitaba las ramas de los árboles y hacía caer sus hojas marchitas, creando una lluvia de tonos castaños que hacía la escena todavía más bella.

Sus ojos se miraban fijamente, con amor, con ternura, con aquella pasión tan intensa que solo las personas que se aman de verdad pueden sentir. Sus corazones palpitaban simultáneamente, creando una melodía que sus oídos no eran capaces de escuchar, pero sí podía hacerlo la Luna.

Sus labios se aproximaron, con suavidad y dulzura, y mostrando todo el amor que sentían se besaron intensamente. Y se fundieron, sus cuerpos por fin se unieron. A partir de aquel momento ya solo serían una, porque la Luna les había concedido el don de la inmortalidad de su amor.

Te quiero, dijeron las dos al mismo tiempo, y sus ojos brillaron mientras sus labios dibujaban una sonrisa de complicidad. Eran felices, se amaban, y solo eso les importaba.

Sus cuerpos todavía abrazados empezaron a relajarse, había llegado la hora de descansar. Sus párpados se cerraron y las dos cayeron en un profundo sueño, tan precioso como aquel momento que acababan de vivir.

"Por ellas brillo esta noche", le dijo la Luna a una estrella. "Por ellas y su amor".



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Moonlight

The full moon was shining lighting up the cold and wet night. Two girls were lying on the wet grass of a old garden whispering in their ears words of love. They were hugging under the moonlight, the lovers were ignoring the rest of the world, only had place for their eternal love.

Their bodies, embraced, merged becoming into one. Their souls were intertwined playing over them. The moon was watching them, excited, knowing that she was the only that be able to saw that tenderness.

The girls smiled hypnotized by the magic of love and beauty of that distant friend that was watching from the sky. The strong cold wind stirred the branches of the trees, drop their wilted leaves, creating a shower of brown tones that made the scene even more beautiful.

Their eyes were stared with love, tenderness, with the passion so intense that only people who truly loved could feel. Their hearts beat simultaneously, creating a melody that their ears were not able to hear, but the moon could.

Their lips were getting closer, with softness and sweetness, and showing all the love they felt, they kissed intensely. And they melted, their bodies finally merged. From that time they would only be one, because the moon gave them the gift of immortality of love.

I love you, said both at the same time, and their eyes sparkled while their lips smiled with complicity. They were happy, loved, nothing more mattered.

Their embraced bodies began to relax, had time to rest. Their eyelids were closed and the two girls fell into a deep sleep, as precious as the moment that had just experienced.

"For them I'm shining tonight," said the moon to a star. "For them and their love."
Este relato está basado en la magnifica sonata para piano de Ludwing van Beethoven llamada "Moonlight".

Os dejo algunos links indispensables para entender la relación entre mi relato y la canción.

Escúchala aquí

Conoce la historia de este gran compositor: Biografía.

Espero que os guste y que dejéis vuestra sincera opinión.

También puedes leer este relato en mi otra cuenta: [link]

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A story based on the magnificent Ludwig van Beethoven's piano sonata called "Moonlight."

You have some links necessary to understand the relationship between my story and song.

Listen here .

Read the story of this great composer: Biography.

I hope you enjoy and let your honest opinion.

You can also read this story in my other account: [link]
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:iconllordssoth:
LlordSsoth Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012
WOW..... This matches the Sonata so well that It almost seems to have been written by the master himself.

Many wishes for your inspiration to be never ending.
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kamy-ska Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so glad to know that you think this about my story.

Thank you so much for your words :huggle:
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LlordSsoth Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012
You're welcome
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BattleDaughter Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It was a beautiful story ^^
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kamy-ska Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :huggle:
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ludwig-sensei Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Bella poesía amorosa. Dulce amor nacido en un noche fresca de luna. Doloroso sol, que jamas separe lo que ya unio la luz de la luna. Dos almas, dos cuerpos, dos vidas y un solo coroazón. Vida eterna a un amor, larga esperansa por un don. Magnifica obra, me encanto mucho... La sonata es la numero 14 de Ludwig van Beethoven nombrada Quasi una fantasi.
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kamy-ska Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Muchas gracias por leer y comentar mi relato.

Me alegra que te haya gustado :aww:
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ludwig-sensei Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
me encanto, sigue escribiendo por favor esperare con muchas ansias
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xNamelessDreamerx Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Ja saps quant m'agrada aquest relat.

és preciós, i poques paraules hi ha a dir.

La imatge que dibuixes es veu clarísima... no és que la imaginis, es que la pots notar clavada a la pupil·la.

És preciós. Ets preciosa.

T'estimo amor.
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kamy-ska Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Moltes gracies amor.

Saps que cada relat que escric el faig pensant amb tú, i amb lo preciosa que ets es imposible que no surti un relat ple de dolçor.

T'estime molt carinyo.
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